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Whirr is a character I'm playing in an RP that's supposed to be like World War 3. He's a japanese made service android (wait staff, personal assistants, etc). He was excorting a group of japanese scientists to a conference in Beijing when the event was bombed by russians. Everyone died except one man - who he thought was dead.
He returned to japan and asked to be re-purposed with combat capability in order to help bring the war to a stop.
He mostly acts as an ambassador, though he is capable of active camouflage and localized time slowing (thanks to his watch).
He returned to japan and asked to be re-purposed with combat capability in order to help bring the war to a stop.
He mostly acts as an ambassador, though he is capable of active camouflage and localized time slowing (thanks to his watch).
Category Artwork (Traditional) / General Furry Art
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Size 500 x 770px
File Size 149.4 kB
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*looks at the gun the skunk puts to his head*
"alright alright i'll comment. jeeeeeez."
face needs work: nose is too broad, hair needs better definition, actually the whole face needs definition.
I like the clothes. simple, yet possessing a unique style. the off-center X snaps look intriguing. i'm imagining beige top, cyan pants.
feet/shoes look great, better once fleshed and colored. arms seem tucked a bit too far back, show more armpit-crease.
Ears look like a weeaboo headband, like they're not really a part of his anatomy, especially on the side profile pic. stick them a bit more to the side (somewhere between 45 and 60 degrees from the eye/ear line), make the hair flow around them, not like they've sprouted in the middle of it. perhaps more animal features than just ears. upturned nose, slightly clefted lip, a hint of buck teeth, thicker, more well defined thighs.
tl;dr clothing is great, needs to look more anthro and less like a human with a pair of fake anime bunny ears.
"alright alright i'll comment. jeeeeeez."
face needs work: nose is too broad, hair needs better definition, actually the whole face needs definition.
I like the clothes. simple, yet possessing a unique style. the off-center X snaps look intriguing. i'm imagining beige top, cyan pants.
feet/shoes look great, better once fleshed and colored. arms seem tucked a bit too far back, show more armpit-crease.
Ears look like a weeaboo headband, like they're not really a part of his anatomy, especially on the side profile pic. stick them a bit more to the side (somewhere between 45 and 60 degrees from the eye/ear line), make the hair flow around them, not like they've sprouted in the middle of it. perhaps more animal features than just ears. upturned nose, slightly clefted lip, a hint of buck teeth, thicker, more well defined thighs.
tl;dr clothing is great, needs to look more anthro and less like a human with a pair of fake anime bunny ears.
well he's supposed to look like a human with a pair of (realistic, I suppose) bunny ears, since he's a japanese Usagimimi. But yeah - it was a quick and dirty pen sketch x3.
the cross snaps are supposed to be centered, actually - though they're centered on the outfit, and not over the breast crease.
Fun fact: I have no idea what to do with his feet. I sort of imagined something with pants ending in cuffs, but outside of that I have no idea. maybe I'll give him bunny feet.
I was actually thinking purple-blue or what have you, or grey for the entire ensemble, myself.
but I'll likely work on his design s'more. might turn him into a permanent character. I rather lik ehim.
the cross snaps are supposed to be centered, actually - though they're centered on the outfit, and not over the breast crease.
Fun fact: I have no idea what to do with his feet. I sort of imagined something with pants ending in cuffs, but outside of that I have no idea. maybe I'll give him bunny feet.
I was actually thinking purple-blue or what have you, or grey for the entire ensemble, myself.
but I'll likely work on his design s'more. might turn him into a permanent character. I rather lik ehim.
my recommendation for feat? if not big, victorian riding/combat boots to house his big toes, then spats and equally huge toes, like so: http://dianehoward.com/images/Steve_5.jpg
I still say move his ears down. usagimimi or otherwise, they look more realistic and attached at a lower, non-hairband angle.
I still say move his ears down. usagimimi or otherwise, they look more realistic and attached at a lower, non-hairband angle.
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