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Title: All Gone (WIP)
Artist/Writer/Singer/Composer: Bjorn Polar
Album: Hero
Year: 2011
Genre: Progressive Pop?
My first song. Original. Please give me some constructive criticism, even petty things. I toned down my voice because it sucks. If you listen to all of it, it gets better as it progresses..
Mostly it's instrumental..
Lyrics:
It's all, all gone now,
It's not, not over.
Please don't, please don't,
Take her, take her,
From us, from us.
This was actually done to accompany an art project I am working on now (not the album art), and just cause I wanted to write a song.
The piece is a statement about cutting down forests so "her" is mama nature.
Done in FL Studio 10.
Final of this song: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6600513
Artist/Writer/Singer/Composer: Bjorn Polar
Album: Hero
Year: 2011
Genre: Progressive Pop?
My first song. Original. Please give me some constructive criticism, even petty things. I toned down my voice because it sucks. If you listen to all of it, it gets better as it progresses..
Mostly it's instrumental..
Lyrics:
It's all, all gone now,
It's not, not over.
Please don't, please don't,
Take her, take her,
From us, from us.
This was actually done to accompany an art project I am working on now (not the album art), and just cause I wanted to write a song.
The piece is a statement about cutting down forests so "her" is mama nature.
Done in FL Studio 10.
Final of this song: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6600513
Category Music / Pop
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 3.22 MB
That was very, very nice! Instrumentals were flawless, in my opinion. Your voice, though, seemed to be buried by the instrument, don't turn it down, turn it up!!! Use your voice to the best of your ability and form the song around you voice, not your voice around the song. The lyrics, while simple, were very nice as well. All in all, I applaud your work, good sir.
check the final.. tell me what u think
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6600513
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6600513
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