Very nicely done

Thanks!

Nicely done, although the format made reading it a little hard.

Thanks!

great story VDO wish i could have seen the stream.

Heh, hopefully the story itself was entertaining enough!

Okay, first off, I want to thank you for writing this. This story has been an idea which I've had building up in my head, for the last few months with absolutely no way of letting it out. If I'd somehow attempted this, it wouldn't have been a patch on what you've got here. You managed to work with my scraps of an idea really well and managed to get all the characters really in character. So well done!

Anyway, I'd like to go a bit more in depth here, so some of this might be spoilerific. (So if you're reading this and you haven't read the story yet, what are you doing?! Get reading it!).

Anyway, there's a lot of really great scenes in this. I love the way that you managed to portray Erika's general distaste for school, while still managing to show off her hatred for being wrong. She's the type of student that goes to school, and wants to just get it over with. She'd never deliberately skip out on school or anything, but she certainly doesn't want to be there. You managed to get that down really well. Also, one of the days I'm going to have to draw Eleve at some point now. I actually really do like leafeons so I wouldn't mind having on to draw, even if Erika's not really a fan of her c.c.

The entire scene involving Earth worked great. I apologise for poking you to add little bits dragging out the story longer and longer, but they worked really well. So I hope you don't mind in the long run! I like the little cameos from Seth and West, and I love how Erika is completely unaware the entire time. I am kinda worried that she now has the directions to Earth though. That's probably not a good thing! You handled the destruction scenes really well though. They're not graphic at all, and wrote in a really good way.

With Mawie and Vapour, I'm again really impressed with how on-character you managed to get them. With Erika I gave you as much information as I could manage in a short period of time. With those two, you didn't really have anything, so I'm really impressed with what you did. The entire scene with with spotting Erika for the first time is completely goofy, but fits into the story well, and is quite possibly my favourite scene in the story thanks to its silliness.

Again the scenes in Erika's room that follow are also a lot of fun. I'm really glad that you managed to get Erika's reckless nature across, all while keeping her completely unaware of the captives in the room. And speaking of the captives, their reactions to a giant, a million times bigger than them is also great. Wrapping it up was a difficult challenge, and once again I apologise for dragging out the story for three streaming sessions, but the ending was great too. It had just about the right amount of silly mixed in!

Anyway, thank you very much. This story is very much appreciated.

Oof, so much thanks!
First of all, thank YOU for supplying so much info when asked! It's the only reason I was able to keep them in-character!

I am kind of curious as to what Eleve would look like too! Although hopefully Erika won't try to spoil her first appearance with a rubber band to the head or something!

No problem with the Earth scene- I kept poking you the same way on the Karin pictures, after all! And it turned out much better for it, a lot more complete and intense. I wouldn't worry too much about her knowing how to reach Earth, though, given that she now is convinced it's home to at least one creature capable of growing big enough to just step over to her homeworld and say "hi!"

Goofy scenes seem to be my specialty- glad it turned out so well!

It really wasn't you dragging it out, I just had more to write for it!

Thanks for the inspiration, characters, and environment that led to this story's creation!

Finally got around reading this, nicely done, i especially liked the bit when vapour confronted Erika the most x3

Thanks! And yeah, heh heh, Vapour really got creepy there for a bit!

Where did Erika land in Europe and what was the path she took? I cant figure it out. It says that "a trail of craters stretched across Europe" and she still couldn't find the uk.

Erika has a tendency to wander- she faffed all around the place quite a bit before she was done!

I'm just curious as to what countries Erika visited before she reached her destination. Also what country did she first land on to begin with.

The last comment was not written well. Sorry about that.