
This one could be due to being in the middle
of some construction work of my own. But
it's also semi-sequel to #11 (On Temptation).
And what husband shouldn't do things like
this? With reason, our bunny wife can say
'My wolf is such a... handy wolf.'
(Now how many of you are going to get that entendre? :- ))
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Note: The Thursday Prompt that got this one written
was 'stones.'
LINK TO: Spoken Word Version
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On Determination (#14)
I’ll give him this: as goals go it is good.
But walling in a big garden? He’s not
Cut for this kind of thing. He really should
Call a contractor, let them take their shot.
Oh no, the work goes on. The summer days
See him at play with stones and wet concrete.
Wolves aren’t good masons and I’ve found it pays
To groom him hard. Stuck fur from head to feet.
Still, the wall’s strong and high. A bonus, too.
I once went out to weed, brought him cool drink.
Then leaned on it, flashed bunny tail. And you
Can guess the rest. The weeds and stones won’t fink.
That which a wall keeps out, all fine and well.
But what a wall keeps in: Ah, I shan’t tell.
of some construction work of my own. But
it's also semi-sequel to #11 (On Temptation).
And what husband shouldn't do things like
this? With reason, our bunny wife can say
'My wolf is such a... handy wolf.'
(Now how many of you are going to get that entendre? :- ))
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>>>>> On Determination (#14) <<<<<
By Fred Brown, Oct 7/2011
fwbrown61
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Note: The Thursday Prompt that got this one written
was 'stones.'
LINK TO: Spoken Word Version
<<<< To Wolf and Bunny Table of Contents
On Determination (#14)
I’ll give him this: as goals go it is good.
But walling in a big garden? He’s not
Cut for this kind of thing. He really should
Call a contractor, let them take their shot.
Oh no, the work goes on. The summer days
See him at play with stones and wet concrete.
Wolves aren’t good masons and I’ve found it pays
To groom him hard. Stuck fur from head to feet.
Still, the wall’s strong and high. A bonus, too.
I once went out to weed, brought him cool drink.
Then leaned on it, flashed bunny tail. And you
Can guess the rest. The weeds and stones won’t fink.
That which a wall keeps out, all fine and well.
But what a wall keeps in: Ah, I shan’t tell.
Category Poetry / All
Species Rabbit / Hare
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 5.2 kB
Thanx. Got a snicker out of the picture of a bunny wife grooming
her concrete-encrusted wolf husband. But how to end it? Ah ha: got it.
It's now a *private* garden. Easy.
And you must have your New Submissions page on speeddial.
Subbed at 2:04, your fave in at 2:08. Gotta be a record. :- )
her concrete-encrusted wolf husband. But how to end it? Ah ha: got it.
It's now a *private* garden. Easy.
And you must have your New Submissions page on speeddial.
Subbed at 2:04, your fave in at 2:08. Gotta be a record. :- )
And well you may smirk. Consider that the wall is only
so high. So if they're standing up against the wall we'll
probably be able to see her ears.
As they start to sort of... bounce a bit.
Dirtier sonnet than it looks, no? :- > Thanx for
comment.
FB.
* journal reply soon, soon...
so high. So if they're standing up against the wall we'll
probably be able to see her ears.
As they start to sort of... bounce a bit.
Dirtier sonnet than it looks, no? :- > Thanx for
comment.
FB.
* journal reply soon, soon...
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