very nice story. You put in alot more detail than me and alot more pages. This was well executed story and you have a nack for putting yourself in a child's mindset...me on the other hand is still working on mine. Anyway good story and great work

Not bad! You're a pretty good writer, you know that Zee?

It has a nice, easy, cutesy gentle feel to it overall. *Fave!*

Yay! Thanks, guys! I'm glad you like it! Heehee, I think three comments is a new record for me! Squeeeee!

Make that four! Very cute story. Loved it!

Squeee! Thanks, Fluffy! Wow, four compliments! I'm running out of fingers to count them on!

Kazootles! This was quite a tale, Zoom. I've got to compliment you on the quality flow it had throughout the entire thing. One thing as a writer that I personally pride myself on is being able to write in such a way that the reader never has to break as a result of my lack of connecting one idea to another. I see you are dedicated, and talented, in doing this as well. Bravo!

Something interesting I must note is how a tale like this would really appeal to a variety of audiences. It's quite honest in how it presents the tales of each character and how they feel. Plus, the way Zee acts as main character while not coming off as an attention hog is really quite nice.

That is a very nice story, Zee-Zee! ^^ I liked it a lot and I read both parts, but I thought I'd put my comment here. I think you really capture the mindset of a toddler in a very cute way.

Thanks a bunch! You've inspired me to write one of my own! :)

Squeeee, thanks! ^.^ Great to know I've inspired more stories, I always love to read them! *hugs*

Your welcome. I like them, to. ^^

Love it!

Squeeee! Thanks, Counter! I'm glad you liked it! *hugs*

*hug*

Bad thing is, I could only read half of it, since I don't have the office tools.

Darn home premium! >_<

You can also read it here without needing any of those nasty Microsoft things: http://lionstigerandligers.niceboar.....rnoon-t751.htm ^.^

Thank thee! ^^

Zee-Zee, forgive me, I know this was a long time ago, but was this Susie ever a real person on furaffinity or elsewhere?

No, everyone in this story is just someone I made up. ^.^