In Better Spirits: Page 1
Here's the first page for
Joltieboy's comic, In better Spirits! Dawn's just hauled Joltie's ass out of a two-bit casino before he could drink and gamble away what's left of his cash after he's just gotten fired...I wonder what she has planned for the poor chap ?
Joltie is © his player
Dawn belongs to J. Bernal
Joltieboy's comic, In better Spirits! Dawn's just hauled Joltie's ass out of a two-bit casino before he could drink and gamble away what's left of his cash after he's just gotten fired...I wonder what she has planned for the poor chap ?Joltie is © his player
Dawn belongs to J. Bernal
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Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Dog (Other)
Size 935 x 1280px
File Size 218.2 kB
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I've been looking forward to this comic ever since you announced it a few weeks ago. :) A comic featuring Dawn, whom we last saw in your sexyfur comic, "Collecting Samples", is sure to turn out really awesome, in my opinion.
Very nice start in terms of art for the first page! The overall soft coloring and smooth shading/lighting looks great, and linework rendering you did for the red truck and attached trailer (wish I could remember the proper brand names for them, or what brands they resemble thereof anyways) actually looks very good, considering that you stated in an earlier comment that you were still getting used to drawing inanimate objects. Those were the aspects that stood out for me the most here.
Can't wait to see the next upcoming pages to follow. Keep up the great work!
Very nice start in terms of art for the first page! The overall soft coloring and smooth shading/lighting looks great, and linework rendering you did for the red truck and attached trailer (wish I could remember the proper brand names for them, or what brands they resemble thereof anyways) actually looks very good, considering that you stated in an earlier comment that you were still getting used to drawing inanimate objects. Those were the aspects that stood out for me the most here.
Can't wait to see the next upcoming pages to follow. Keep up the great work!
A rather punny title, considering she's talking about him drowning his sorrows in a decent alcohol... or, "in better spirits". :)
Sorry, English geek, so that was the most notable thing to me initially. X3
I absolutely love the way you rendered the vehicle and attachment -- few can actually draw inanimate objects, especially if their specialty is in animate ones. The coloring fits perfectly, as well. :D
Can't wait to see where this goes... <3
Sorry, English geek, so that was the most notable thing to me initially. X3
I absolutely love the way you rendered the vehicle and attachment -- few can actually draw inanimate objects, especially if their specialty is in animate ones. The coloring fits perfectly, as well. :D
Can't wait to see where this goes... <3
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