Ok, little
hida somehow found himself at a party with delicious food, he clambered around the table trying to find something delicious all to himself, eventually happening upon an empty cookie platter. As he was licking up the crumbs, Swift (
renaayama) happened by and saw the bite sized draggy on the tray. Never one to pass up a delicacy such as dragon, swift quickly prepared the little draggy for the trip of a liftetime.... Good thing he's small, because swift's already imagining how he tastes.
Ooook! Now for my comments on this piece. This piece was primarily drawn as a gift for swift and hida, and is part of a set that I'm also star in as well as Dest... The point was to practice my facial expressions and aspects/perspectove - lining the face up and getting it to look pretty well and make it seem expressive, as well as add a prop that also seemed to be "in tune" with the focal point - swift's face.... And I would have to say I came reeaaaally close to nailing it.
It was also meant to act as a spacial alignment piece - where do I put stuff on the paper and do I use space effectively? I meant to have just the head and hida sandwich, but I failed on placement, hence the extremely crappy filler sketching for the body. The hands came out fairly well, I have to admit, and overall I'm pleased with how this looks. Is it amazing? Nah, not really, but it's getting there! :D I just hope swift, hida and everyone else likes it! Feel free to tell me whatcha think!
(And I love to hear critique, I just suck at implementing it.)
hida somehow found himself at a party with delicious food, he clambered around the table trying to find something delicious all to himself, eventually happening upon an empty cookie platter. As he was licking up the crumbs, Swift (
renaayama) happened by and saw the bite sized draggy on the tray. Never one to pass up a delicacy such as dragon, swift quickly prepared the little draggy for the trip of a liftetime.... Good thing he's small, because swift's already imagining how he tastes.Ooook! Now for my comments on this piece. This piece was primarily drawn as a gift for swift and hida, and is part of a set that I'm also star in as well as Dest... The point was to practice my facial expressions and aspects/perspectove - lining the face up and getting it to look pretty well and make it seem expressive, as well as add a prop that also seemed to be "in tune" with the focal point - swift's face.... And I would have to say I came reeaaaally close to nailing it.
It was also meant to act as a spacial alignment piece - where do I put stuff on the paper and do I use space effectively? I meant to have just the head and hida sandwich, but I failed on placement, hence the extremely crappy filler sketching for the body. The hands came out fairly well, I have to admit, and overall I'm pleased with how this looks. Is it amazing? Nah, not really, but it's getting there! :D I just hope swift, hida and everyone else likes it! Feel free to tell me whatcha think!
(And I love to hear critique, I just suck at implementing it.)
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Vore
Species Vulpine (Other)
Size 1280 x 960px
File Size 136.9 kB
Hehe, thank you :D
I'm really bad with critique :/ I just can critique myself lol
Anyway, its a good way to keep up practice and its good that you are happy with the picture yourself.
Most people stop practice and just give up on drawing because they are not happy with the result.
I'm dangerous :D
I'm really bad with critique :/ I just can critique myself lol
Anyway, its a good way to keep up practice and its good that you are happy with the picture yourself.
Most people stop practice and just give up on drawing because they are not happy with the result.
I'm dangerous :D
Hehe, you are quite dangerous, auch schoen. (kind, right?) It all depends on which side of the sandwich you're on, I guess! hehe. I'm Honestly *REALLY* glad you approve of it! I seriously spent like four days just trying to get the head right, and another like four hours trying to get the sandwich, fingers and jaws right... or close... but As I look at it, I feel kind of bad that I didn't put more effort into the body - it feels like I got lazy (but that can't really be fixed now; I could always try another sketch, I suppose! :D)
And I have to admit, I was discouraged for the first 500 times I tried to draw this; each time it looked bad, or nothing lined up, or it wasn't even close to looking like a fox/canine (I still think I re your muzzle a smidge too long), but now it's looking not too bad!
Once again, I'm really glad you liked it. You/swift is pretty fun to draw, and I'd be more than happy to do it again for more practice (especially since you have a cute floofy tail <3) You can do whatever you want with this picture - I don't mind :D
And I have to admit, I was discouraged for the first 500 times I tried to draw this; each time it looked bad, or nothing lined up, or it wasn't even close to looking like a fox/canine (I still think I re your muzzle a smidge too long), but now it's looking not too bad!
Once again, I'm really glad you liked it. You/swift is pretty fun to draw, and I'd be more than happy to do it again for more practice (especially since you have a cute floofy tail <3) You can do whatever you want with this picture - I don't mind :D
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