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Not as pretty as hoped it would be, but Im happy with the results. ^^"
So originally this was supposed to be Zenark's freebie, but i bumped it up because i liked the idea so much and we agreed to make this his Iron Artist commission.
Here we have Leon, a fennec who just happened to be at the wrong place at the wrong time.
As he awakens he finds himself naked and covered with cream.
His body is composed of cake, layered with whipped cream, and in the inside, strawberry jam.
His tail is whipped cream as well, and he's topped with a mint, just in case.
Whoever is there will definitely like their meal.
Leon, shall not.
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Iron Artist for
(Critique would be wonderful!)
So originally this was supposed to be Zenark's freebie, but i bumped it up because i liked the idea so much and we agreed to make this his Iron Artist commission.
Here we have Leon, a fennec who just happened to be at the wrong place at the wrong time.
As he awakens he finds himself naked and covered with cream.
His body is composed of cake, layered with whipped cream, and in the inside, strawberry jam.
His tail is whipped cream as well, and he's topped with a mint, just in case.
Whoever is there will definitely like their meal.
Leon, shall not.
________________________
Iron Artist for
(Critique would be wonderful!)
Category All / Transformation
Species Vulpine (Other)
Size 1280 x 1127px
File Size 406.4 kB
Critique:
The detail put into the 'cream' covering the body makes it difficult to tell if it is cream or just a white fennec. More detail into the cream, mainly make its appearance appear more "sloppy" rather than "paper thin spread". A way to acheive this is to go outside the lines. Consider looking at cream on cakes for reference and try and 'mess' it up a little bit. Not too much though.
The mint on top is a cute addition and the cake bowl thing he is in helps show it is a dessert. Another nice addition is the red ring around the cake base. These little things help reinforce the image of a fancy dessert ready and made.
The detail put into the 'cream' covering the body makes it difficult to tell if it is cream or just a white fennec. More detail into the cream, mainly make its appearance appear more "sloppy" rather than "paper thin spread". A way to acheive this is to go outside the lines. Consider looking at cream on cakes for reference and try and 'mess' it up a little bit. Not too much though.
The mint on top is a cute addition and the cake bowl thing he is in helps show it is a dessert. Another nice addition is the red ring around the cake base. These little things help reinforce the image of a fancy dessert ready and made.
No, not at all.
Just the cream detail needs work on. Use references from cakes and other desserts. Cream is spread thickly and the way they are spread resemble 'waves' or rows.
For example:
http://www.freefoto.com/images/09/0.....m-Cake_web.jpg
http://img4.myrecipes.com/i/recipes.....k-394882-l.jpg
But, for your first attempt:
Well done.
Just the cream detail needs work on. Use references from cakes and other desserts. Cream is spread thickly and the way they are spread resemble 'waves' or rows.
For example:
http://www.freefoto.com/images/09/0.....m-Cake_web.jpg
http://img4.myrecipes.com/i/recipes.....k-394882-l.jpg
But, for your first attempt:
Well done.
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