This is a new style I'm working on heavily based on Morenatsu's cartoony/anime-ish style. I want to create a visual novel of my own that covers the story of some new characters I made earlier, with Spectrum being a cameo appearance but still having an effect on the story line.

First time using Illustrator and using the pen tool. I had everything at "1 pt" but I changed it to "2 pt" when I was done, and I think I'm pleased with how clean and thick the lines look, but not too thick. Any suggestions/tips would be great. I'm still learning . . .

Will color soon, with clothes and expressions! ^^