Nice story - good mix of plot & exposition, and I'd love to see more when you feel it's ready... thanks for sharing!

Very intriguing, and very well written. I'll look forward to seeing how it continues.

I suppose there is a reason why they are all girls.

Darlene has made the assumption the ones she's seen are female. She will eventually find out they are not.

I hope you continue this. I've become very interested in this world of yours, and I think it'd be fascinating to see more of the beginnings, when and how they were created. I've got a bad feeling about the poor reporter's future, though.

Very gripping writing, again, you manage to pull me right into the main character's head and point of view.

This is another one that I have mapped out and ready to finish. It merely waits for me to work out the last few details. That's why this one stalled, actually. I became indecisive about how I was going to end it and the closer to the finish I got, the harder it became to write the words that defined how events concluded.

Thanks for the compliments!

I've found about your stories a few weeks ago, and since then i read a whole bunch of them. The way your stories are told, the universe, settings and characters are so good, i am pretty much in love with that universe. They are amazingly good and captivating. Well detailed, but not boring.

This one was an unexpected treat. After reading some of your stories, i wondered how the morphs came to be. Since those are so old, i cannot help but be afraid to ask: will this one ever find it's way to the gallery on a finished version?

All I can honestly say is that at this point it feels like it may never happen. However, I had an 8 year dry spell between this entry and the 'monster fan-fic that ate my life' called "Broken." I was surprised that I found something to pull me so strongly back into writing.

So I will instead say, "Never say never." I've often thought about trying to resurrect this piece and finish it. I have no idea if or when that might happen.

I see. You can't rush inspiration. Your work is indeed so full of hearth. Who knows what will happen...

But really, thank you for those amazing stories. They inspired me a lot. I'll be here for the next few years waiting for something new :)