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Title: Hero
Artist/Writer/Singer/Composer: Bjorn Polar
Album: Hero
Track: 3
Year: 2011
Genre: Progressive Pop
Album Art/Album Hub: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6648845/
Constructive criticism is much appreciated!
Tell me what you think.
I hate this song so much, I'm glad I'm done. I redid the prechorus with like 10 different melodies/rhythms/etc, none of them worked well, and I still dislike the current one.
I just feel like it sounds too contrived, even though the meaning is very strong (and personal).
Breakdown: meh.
2 guitar solos in one song? yes i did.
Stuff i need to work on: singing, catchy tune, variation/unity balance, prechoruses.
Next song may be "White Elephants (Dressed in Lies)" (as in the album art) but I may do another one first.
Lyrics:
I hope to, I want to be, I hope, hope, hope,
I hope to free somebody,
And be their HERO.
Save them from their own self,
And lead them from their lonesome,
I’d heal them when they’re hopeless,
And save them from the shameless.
‘Cause no one could save me.
Done in FL Studio 10.
Copyright Bjorn Polar.
Artist/Writer/Singer/Composer: Bjorn Polar
Album: Hero
Track: 3
Year: 2011
Genre: Progressive Pop
Album Art/Album Hub: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6648845/
Constructive criticism is much appreciated!
Tell me what you think.
I hate this song so much, I'm glad I'm done. I redid the prechorus with like 10 different melodies/rhythms/etc, none of them worked well, and I still dislike the current one.
I just feel like it sounds too contrived, even though the meaning is very strong (and personal).
Breakdown: meh.
2 guitar solos in one song? yes i did.
Stuff i need to work on: singing, catchy tune, variation/unity balance, prechoruses.
Next song may be "White Elephants (Dressed in Lies)" (as in the album art) but I may do another one first.
Lyrics:
I hope to, I want to be, I hope, hope, hope,
I hope to free somebody,
And be their HERO.
Save them from their own self,
And lead them from their lonesome,
I’d heal them when they’re hopeless,
And save them from the shameless.
‘Cause no one could save me.
Done in FL Studio 10.
Copyright Bjorn Polar.
Category Music / Pop
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 2.84 MB
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