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Late, late, late.
In a moment y'all will be happy it was, though.
Red Lantern is now on Twitter, and Blogspot:
http://twitter.com/#!/RedLanternComic
http://redlanterncomic.blogspot.com/
And on our own website, finally!
http://www.rukiscroax.com/redlantern
This is a collaborative comic between Rukis and Alectorfencer. Red Lantern will be premiering weekly right here on FA, and at http://www.rukiscroax.com/redlantern . The free version of the comic will tell the entire story. The eventual printed release will have extra content, and adult content.
This comic is rated R for adult language, adult situations, violence, and themes of war, prostitution, and slavery.
rukis is responsible for all writing, and character artwork/color
alectorfencer is responsible for all background elements, scenery, and landscapes
Late, late, late.
In a moment y'all will be happy it was, though.
Red Lantern is now on Twitter, and Blogspot:
http://twitter.com/#!/RedLanternComic
http://redlanterncomic.blogspot.com/
And on our own website, finally!
http://www.rukiscroax.com/redlantern
This is a collaborative comic between Rukis and Alectorfencer. Red Lantern will be premiering weekly right here on FA, and at http://www.rukiscroax.com/redlantern . The free version of the comic will tell the entire story. The eventual printed release will have extra content, and adult content.
This comic is rated R for adult language, adult situations, violence, and themes of war, prostitution, and slavery.
rukis is responsible for all writing, and character artwork/color
alectorfencer is responsible for all background elements, scenery, and landscapes
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 891 x 1188px
File Size 1.55 MB
Listed in Folders
I love the comic. dhaval is a bit too naive for my tastes though. Not that I'm criticizing your work at all. I wouldn't ask for a thing to be changed.
Does he understand what kinda place he's at or what's instore for him? I'm beginning to suspect that he just thinks he's at some place with a lot of pretty girls and where chivalry still reigns.
Does he understand what kinda place he's at or what's instore for him? I'm beginning to suspect that he just thinks he's at some place with a lot of pretty girls and where chivalry still reigns.
I'm really enjoying seeing this project coming along, it looks like a bigger peak in the storyline is about to approach, with the auction. I'm basically waiting for the boy to grab his feet and run away, after all its only a colar.
I have been thinking a long time about this and hope you dont mind me saying, I'd like to give you a small piece of my mind, just for your consideration and future pages.
I kind of miss the space in your comic. I feel the pannels could live a lot more if the figures had more space and were less centered. There is so much you can do with image narration concerning position of character and composition. Sometimes a background does way more than a closeup, say, adds emotion and underlines the relationship figures share in an image. Even if I know they have pretty backs and it is a tendency in the fandom to stay to, well, as close as you can get. I know its closed rooms and all, but there is still so many ways to enhance it. It may be my opinion but I would also say, that considering its so much dialog (which is great, it isnt the classical bamwhamurks comic), I'd say its better to rather make a few frames more and have a less overfilled appearance. Its digital. Use that, play with it.
I know its helluva work to do a comic, so I really respect what you have here, knowing I couldnt do as easy.
I have been thinking a long time about this and hope you dont mind me saying, I'd like to give you a small piece of my mind, just for your consideration and future pages.
I kind of miss the space in your comic. I feel the pannels could live a lot more if the figures had more space and were less centered. There is so much you can do with image narration concerning position of character and composition. Sometimes a background does way more than a closeup, say, adds emotion and underlines the relationship figures share in an image. Even if I know they have pretty backs and it is a tendency in the fandom to stay to, well, as close as you can get. I know its closed rooms and all, but there is still so many ways to enhance it. It may be my opinion but I would also say, that considering its so much dialog (which is great, it isnt the classical bamwhamurks comic), I'd say its better to rather make a few frames more and have a less overfilled appearance. Its digital. Use that, play with it.
I know its helluva work to do a comic, so I really respect what you have here, knowing I couldnt do as easy.
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