Phaser is a bit overused. I would say only do the phaser trick once, then change it up, then bring it back in later in the song or on a similar sounding part.
Take one of those repeats out that you use at 1:20 and it will sound a lot better.

Also, the the repeat build up (where you go from 4 down to 2, down to 1, and then the arrow) you only should use once or twice in a song, spaced out epicly, and only before epic drops, otherwise it will sound like crap.

The record scratchs are almost a good idea, if you can pull it off.

Go easy on the Fippin Double when you use it, because it only sounds good some of times. You have to remember that the original version of this song was already epic, so don't change it too much. ^^

ive been thinking... instead of taking out extra phasers why not add flanger to the phase? and rename to flanger phase so people understand thats the main point of this? please leave comments and speculations on this