I struggled quiet a bit with this chapter. I spent the first week agonizing on how 'real' to make the dangers of this world. I seriously considered changing my plans on how I would present the story. In the end, though, I decided to go ahead with my original intentions. I believe readers will understand and accept the hardships that will befall the characters as long as they serve the story.
I also worried I may have over done it with the dragon's POV. Even reading it myself, it gets a little overwhelming at times. I hope it doesn't put anyone off.
The next chapter will be longer in coming as well, with the holidays approaching.
I also worried I may have over done it with the dragon's POV. Even reading it myself, it gets a little overwhelming at times. I hope it doesn't put anyone off.
The next chapter will be longer in coming as well, with the holidays approaching.
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 100px
File Size 34.9 kB
Time is short, so comment is fast: that's strong, robust, confident stuff.
Piss on worry about length. This place needs more like this. Shall see about
going back for chaps 1-12.
Copyright issues could be entirely solvable (dunno how) but my eye says this
one could make you money (again, dunno how).
And/or your rep (if that's not made already :- ) )
FB.
Piss on worry about length. This place needs more like this. Shall see about
going back for chaps 1-12.
Copyright issues could be entirely solvable (dunno how) but my eye says this
one could make you money (again, dunno how).
And/or your rep (if that's not made already :- ) )
FB.
I'm not worried about copyright on these. I finally got back into writing because of the movie and this story. That makes me happy and that's enough. I appreciate your comments and I'm glad you like what you've read so far. Though it would all make more sense if you read it from the start.
It might make even more sense if you've seen the movie.
It might make even more sense if you've seen the movie.
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