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Sorry about the long wait on this one, finally getting caught up with everything.
I realized in this... i really dont like the white side of Serid's face. I dont know why but I just really like the black spot over his eye.
Kinar may be weaker, she may be shy and reserved... but she can give the glare. Not quite as serious or scary as Amo's glare but still.
's char Kaitrin will be back later, dontcha worry.
BTW, I do realize now that I fucked up on the Sandstone Drakes wings. >.<
Edit: I added a glow as suggested for the firelight. I did not want it to be too strong because it is not fully night out, so the glow should be drown out by the natural daylight.
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I realized in this... i really dont like the white side of Serid's face. I dont know why but I just really like the black spot over his eye.
Kinar may be weaker, she may be shy and reserved... but she can give the glare. Not quite as serious or scary as Amo's glare but still.
's char Kaitrin will be back later, dontcha worry.BTW, I do realize now that I fucked up on the Sandstone Drakes wings. >.<
Edit: I added a glow as suggested for the firelight. I did not want it to be too strong because it is not fully night out, so the glow should be drown out by the natural daylight.
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The action alone is not appropriate in any way. However in those two cases yes. If I can't tell the person is angry and then they make it easy to notice they faked it, it is the same as being a lying controlling few choice words here, and the person is no longer worth my time.
Not every guy out there enjoys playing mind games.
Not every guy out there enjoys playing mind games.
Woohoo! New page!
A bit of critique if you don't mind... If you do then disregard.
The fire should cast a much stronger light. Glow on the floor (fairly big), the tent, the dragon, the armor should all reflect the fire's light. I think it would tie up the scene perfectly, and give it a much more lively feeling. Other than that, fantastic! :)
A bit of critique if you don't mind... If you do then disregard.
The fire should cast a much stronger light. Glow on the floor (fairly big), the tent, the dragon, the armor should all reflect the fire's light. I think it would tie up the scene perfectly, and give it a much more lively feeling. Other than that, fantastic! :)
*Very happy* Now I can resume proper anticipation of the comic since it's been successful. If I haven't said it often enough, I really, really like this comic series.
Sandstone drake wings are a pain, I'll admit, but the riderless dragon is still fully recognizable. :)
Kaitrin will likely head off to the inn in Goldshire to confuse the folk there. He stays in the upstairs room where the guards don't visit, so he won't be attacked. Peaceful dragondruids for the win. He can also appreciate Worgen.
Sandstone drake wings are a pain, I'll admit, but the riderless dragon is still fully recognizable. :)
Kaitrin will likely head off to the inn in Goldshire to confuse the folk there. He stays in the upstairs room where the guards don't visit, so he won't be attacked. Peaceful dragondruids for the win. He can also appreciate Worgen.
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