
Since FA went down the night after I posted Chapter 1... Arrgh. Anyways... Here's the second chapter.
Hope you enjoy.
Lemme know if things seem rushed, things seem too pointed out to the reader that could be scaled back to the character's observations, and whatever. :)
Strangely enough, the main action hasn't happened yet :D
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Hope you enjoy.
Lemme know if things seem rushed, things seem too pointed out to the reader that could be scaled back to the character's observations, and whatever. :)
Strangely enough, the main action hasn't happened yet :D
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