I'm not usually a fan of submitting lineart or nothing, but I plan to put major work into this piccie. A new character of mine.
Jaquie. She's an ass. Jackass. Donkey. Hee haw. Her stubborn, careless, and self centered attitude gets her into trouble frequently. This is where she gets ready for bed and burns the fucking barn down. Everyone thinks it was intentional, but for once, it wasn't.
I'd like some critiques before I color it.
Thank you!~
Jaquie. She's an ass. Jackass. Donkey. Hee haw. Her stubborn, careless, and self centered attitude gets her into trouble frequently. This is where she gets ready for bed and burns the fucking barn down. Everyone thinks it was intentional, but for once, it wasn't.
I'd like some critiques before I color it.
Thank you!~
Category Artwork (Traditional) / General Furry Art
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 983 x 1280px
File Size 194.2 kB
Maybe having her look away from the lamp as she stretches or gets ready would make it come across as more of an accident. Maybe have her smiling too. I dunno tho as I don't usually give feedback.
I guess if you knocked a lamp, the first thing you'd do is look at it as it's about to smash.. But if you where conveying the idea in a comic, as appose to drawing what happened.. my idea may be ok..
Either way I like your art but I just wanted to say something when no one else bothered. Please don't hang me upside down in a cage in a pit of fleas while ghosts tickle me with feathers.. I only say that because you're a raccoon and you've gotta be careful around them.. The demon part is tame in comparison.
I guess if you knocked a lamp, the first thing you'd do is look at it as it's about to smash.. But if you where conveying the idea in a comic, as appose to drawing what happened.. my idea may be ok..
Either way I like your art but I just wanted to say something when no one else bothered. Please don't hang me upside down in a cage in a pit of fleas while ghosts tickle me with feathers.. I only say that because you're a raccoon and you've gotta be careful around them.. The demon part is tame in comparison.
Thanks for the critique! ^^
Oh! And she's not smiling 'cause she's sorta yawning while stretching and she knocks the lamp mid stretch. It is a very good idea to make her look away from the lamp. Oh, and she doesn't have the courtesy to cover her mouth as she yawns. XD
How very true with the cooniness. X3 And stay away from all coons out in the daytime. They have rabies! ....>>
Oh! And she's not smiling 'cause she's sorta yawning while stretching and she knocks the lamp mid stretch. It is a very good idea to make her look away from the lamp. Oh, and she doesn't have the courtesy to cover her mouth as she yawns. XD
How very true with the cooniness. X3 And stay away from all coons out in the daytime. They have rabies! ....>>
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