
This is matching icons for my friend :sharkienomz: and myself of our characters Jessie(left) and Josh(right).
Category Artwork (Digital) / Human
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 800 x 400px
File Size 351.5 kB
Cute images and great idea! My only critique is that even for girly boys, these two characters are just a little *too* girly in my opinion. until I looked at the keywords, I was trying to figure out how a girl was named Josh. If this is intended, then fine, but otherwise, (shrugs).
On second look, Josh looks fine, but Jessie's hair is out too far on the left, or in other words, the hair on the back of his head looks like it's light and airy and not falling with the shape of his skull. I haven't seen many (any?) yaoi characters whose hair did that.
Just some thoughts from a friendly bi!
P.S. your pinky finger is curved a little weirdly...
On second look, Josh looks fine, but Jessie's hair is out too far on the left, or in other words, the hair on the back of his head looks like it's light and airy and not falling with the shape of his skull. I haven't seen many (any?) yaoi characters whose hair did that.
Just some thoughts from a friendly bi!
P.S. your pinky finger is curved a little weirdly...
Thank you! As for Jessie's hair he's got thic /curly hair in the back so it usually comes out a bit far. As for the boys they are supposed to be that girly. Josh is very gender fluid and Jessie is extremely effeminate as well for different reasons. As for the pinky finger...yeah I noticed it was curved a bit weirdly when I started to color but didn't worry much about it. Hands are difficult xDDD. Thank you for the critique C8
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