page 1 -> https://www.furaffinity.net/view/6878869/
page 2 -> https://www.furaffinity.net/view/6885240/

um so i've had this page done for a week or so.
but i've been really stressed with school, and so i didn't have time to put the text in.
but now that i'm sick i had the time!
i'm not sure if i like this page or page 2 better, so i'm not sure which to submit as my entry!
give suggestions please? which one do YOU like best?

REFLECTIONS
i really liked doing this actually.
i didn't really "get" into PMD-E, but with this all sorts of neat ideas just flooded me at once
and i got a ton of motivation to draw again.
it also let me experiment with this Flash-comic way [the text]
and i feel like i might've learned a bit from it?
even if i don't get accepted, i enjoyed this. i had fun with it.
this style is easy and fun to draw in, even though it's really simple.


hover over the gray boxes/shapes[!] to bring the text up.
goes in order by numbers.