Scanned it in B/W this time. I think I might do it again in grey scale. looks hard to path. But for the over all sketch I'm happy with. upper left arm could be thinner imo. but the facial expression I think I nailed. what do you think happened for this one? XD

Anyway Give me some constructive criticism. I am hoping to sell a few commissions later on. I know I't won't happen instantly but maybe in a year or two I'll be ready.