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Based on a true story: http://shadowlugia249.deviantart.co.....rnal/13319199/
Unlike most of the stories I've uploaded on FA so far, this story is new (by a couple months, anyway). It was inspired by the journal entry made by shadowlugia249 (at deviantART, whom apparently got banned for some reason :( ). It is of course in no way an attempt to copy his writing style. This thing is entirely my own. Like Aura's Jewel, I made it all up as I went along, going back through it a few times to improve some of the more spotty wording.
You all payed attention to the part that said that Pokémon were fictional creatures, right? I did get one person I previewed this to say that this being a fan-fic sorta took away from my potential audience. But when you think about it, becoming a fictional animal only worsens the situation. Or makes it better. Depends on your point of view.
This story was highly experiemental, so it may not be written to its fullest potential. I'm not sure I've ever even read a story like this, the most confusing story I've written so far. Hopefully you all were able to figure out what was going on, but here's an analogy just in case. Imagine yourself standing in front of a mirror. Whatever you do in front of the mirror, your reflection repeats. In a way, your reflection is narrating what you're doing. Now reverse back the idea. Whatever your reflection is doing, you repeat. In essense, this makes you your own reflection. This is what's happening with "Kamilion". He is both the narrator and the reader. Whatever happens to him happens because he said that it does in the story. Which makes the story's title less vague than one may at first think. :)
I want to create a picture to go along with this. I dunno when that will be, but hopefully having this story up will motivate me to get it done in a timely fashion. So far, it hasn't, and it's been up at DA for a month.
Unlike most of the stories I've uploaded on FA so far, this story is new (by a couple months, anyway). It was inspired by the journal entry made by shadowlugia249 (at deviantART, whom apparently got banned for some reason :( ). It is of course in no way an attempt to copy his writing style. This thing is entirely my own. Like Aura's Jewel, I made it all up as I went along, going back through it a few times to improve some of the more spotty wording.
You all payed attention to the part that said that Pokémon were fictional creatures, right? I did get one person I previewed this to say that this being a fan-fic sorta took away from my potential audience. But when you think about it, becoming a fictional animal only worsens the situation. Or makes it better. Depends on your point of view.
This story was highly experiemental, so it may not be written to its fullest potential. I'm not sure I've ever even read a story like this, the most confusing story I've written so far. Hopefully you all were able to figure out what was going on, but here's an analogy just in case. Imagine yourself standing in front of a mirror. Whatever you do in front of the mirror, your reflection repeats. In a way, your reflection is narrating what you're doing. Now reverse back the idea. Whatever your reflection is doing, you repeat. In essense, this makes you your own reflection. This is what's happening with "Kamilion". He is both the narrator and the reader. Whatever happens to him happens because he said that it does in the story. Which makes the story's title less vague than one may at first think. :)
I want to create a picture to go along with this. I dunno when that will be, but hopefully having this story up will motivate me to get it done in a timely fashion. So far, it hasn't, and it's been up at DA for a month.
Category Story / Transformation
Species Dog (Other)
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 19 kB
Heh, i like that story. Too bad it was a sad ending, but that's what he wanted... somewhat lol. Also liked how you kept it first person, lots i see are 3rd. Good Job! Can't wait to see the picture if it comes up.
Oh and your mention of ShadowLugia, i know 3 other Tf writers who said that Shadow was plagiarizing them, taking most of the ideas like the Costume Shop. When reading Shadow's stories, he was plagiarizing. Just so you know.
Oh and your mention of ShadowLugia, i know 3 other Tf writers who said that Shadow was plagiarizing them, taking most of the ideas like the Costume Shop. When reading Shadow's stories, he was plagiarizing. Just so you know.
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