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Well, I've been starting at this for the past few hours trying to figure out what should/can be fixed but I can't see anything...
I >KNOW< for a fact there are flaws but I would like a second opinion. Or third. Or fourth. Or Fifth. Or Sixt- *shot*
To me, his arms seem wonky... I have no idea how to fix them though... :I
CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM PLOX or if you're feeling really helpful today, redlines would be awesome c:
I'm not going for absolute perfection, I just want to know what immediately looks off/wrong and maybe what I could do to fix it. I'm gunna go take a nap. So. Have at it.
I >KNOW< for a fact there are flaws but I would like a second opinion. Or third. Or fourth. Or Fifth. Or Sixt- *shot*
To me, his arms seem wonky... I have no idea how to fix them though... :I
CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM PLOX or if you're feeling really helpful today, redlines would be awesome c:
I'm not going for absolute perfection, I just want to know what immediately looks off/wrong and maybe what I could do to fix it. I'm gunna go take a nap. So. Have at it.
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Husky
Size 1000 x 1000px
File Size 124.5 kB
His arms are too long and slender! The elbow seems a bit low and given that they seem fairly skinny compared to the musculature of his chest and stomach, they are making him seem off.
I'm not saying make the arms super beefy but thicken them up a little and move the joint at the elbow up a smidge and I think that might help
I'm not saying make the arms super beefy but thicken them up a little and move the joint at the elbow up a smidge and I think that might help
I'll take some random shots... <his> left leg should be thicker closer to the thighs rather than be the same thickness all the way down to the knee, his right foot looks huge and elongated at the bottom compared to the rest of his leg.
That's everything I can think of, though I may be looking at things wrong.
That's everything I can think of, though I may be looking at things wrong.
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