I can only hope to ever be able to accomplish such fluid poetry. I should attempt rhymes more often. =3

Rykan...

I have never been able to write free verse. To me, my attempts are nothing but chaos. I have read yours and so many others and it seems natural. I will continue my attempts into this medium, however until I feel well with the structure and content, my rhyming will have to do.

Try your paw at rhyming, but work with what you feel comfortable with. Then mix the two when it just seems to be right!

Take care,
Tye

If you've read into all my writings, you may notice how i've been trying to rhyme more and more lately, with moderate success. But i'll try a bit harder as time goes on. As for my free verse nature, it's simply what is on my mind, with some descriptive words slipped in to help descibe a bit more.

Thanks for the advice..!

Rykan...

Well I haven’t read all of your writings but I have read enough you have talent that only needs to be sharpened. Like me, I have to say time is our best friend as we learn and each day is a new lesson behind us.

Take care,
Tye