certinlly was a good read, had good and tense pacing.

Now as for continuing it several things come to mind.

First his mind is still mostly human but we have seen signs of the Dog having its own consiouness, and of course the most logical leap is to blame the guy who kept calling him a son of a bitch. So Our protagists has to fight with the encroching dog mind while they track down the guy.

Did he do it?

If so? Why and what do they have to do to fix the protagonist?

Maybe their is no fix and as punishment for trying Jill is turned into female dog.

Maybe Our protagonist to become human again must do something embarrassing and dehumanizing for his new master?

Maybe the team captain is not to blame?

Maybe Jill has a turn around and is the cause wanting to train her boyfriend to be more obedient? Or maybe she was fooling around with some girl friends with a book of black magic and never expected this to happen?

Maybe it's a family curse?

Maybe Mitch's own oppion of himself caused the change and only by acting liek a man, while resisting the growing dog, can he reverse the change.

ah poor diggie XD i think the girl friend should only reverse the spell half way by talking half of it into herself, also i think something should happen to the coach........

I remember this when you first posted it. This place was a lot different then. 1000 views used to be an accomplishment. You could actually keep up with the rate of submissions.
It's kind of sad that there's a kind of sedimentary layer thing going on, now. People really gotta dig to find anything older than a few months.