WAY TOO LONG POST FOLLOWS

Boons: Lovely work with the background sky(clouds, rays, and corona) and the feathering on her wings, and I like the detailing on the armor- both embellishments and battle scarring/scuffing. The armor makes a LOT more sense like this than in the show, as well. I really like her mane, stars, moon and all! Also nice to see that bit of cutie mark, almost like she turned to examine the viewer/camera more closely. What shading I can see is well-done, rather fittingly for the character. The fur texturing is subtle, but nice as well.

Bugs: On the other hand, something seems a bit off about the cracks in the ground(maybe how darkly they're shaded in comparison to everything but her? Not sure). Her mane and tail are rather subtle (but well done) in comparison to the rest of the pic- it's like my eyes kept skipping over it at first, to be honest. Also, her fur is rather plain in comparison to the detailing for the wings, and her legs lack definition. Two things about the head: There seems to be a mouth under the chin or an excess line, but it's too subtle for me to tell, and her eyes seem potentially too 'cute' or 'moe' for the character or the situation. Finally, the contrast between certain elements being hyper-detailed or realistic while others match the show(in shape and detail, anyway- not insulting your shading here) jars me from a squeeing.

Summary: IT MAY NOT BE MADE BY AN ARTISTIC GOD, BUT I LIKE IT ANYWAY!

Now when you say "8 hours 33 minutes," do you mean from the initial sketch right down to the coloring and finalizing? Because that is incredible! And I also love what you've done with her mane

lol yeah pretty much xD and thanks :3

Whoa. She can make night in the middle of the day. Also she has planets stuck in her mane. *point* :)

Why is it daytime? (Which makes me think perhaps Luna would melt in the sun, is why we never see her. X_X )

I LOVE what you did with her hair!

Alternatively: I REALLY LIKE HER MANE!

Love the perspective and her hooves.