
This took a lot longer than I meant, but without further ado here is the first piece from my commission list, for
Addylad.
This story is a mystery about Zee's past, in which our famous TV-trained detective has begun an investigation that even the city's police couldn't solve! Who is Zee? Where does he live? What more can be known about him!? There are so many questions, and Addy believes that he can find the answers to them with a bit of snooping and searching. Little does he expect how this case will go, or just how it will end! Curious? Read on!
This piece is a bit of an opportunity for me to try out another different style of writing. Since it's a detective story, I started it off like one of the old noirs, then kept it in the first person because I thought it'd be interesting to see it as a report from his point of view. Tell me what you thought of the style; I'm experimenting with them so that I can keep my stories fresh and interesting not only for my audience, but for myself as well.
Addy is © to
addylad
Zee is © to me.

This story is a mystery about Zee's past, in which our famous TV-trained detective has begun an investigation that even the city's police couldn't solve! Who is Zee? Where does he live? What more can be known about him!? There are so many questions, and Addy believes that he can find the answers to them with a bit of snooping and searching. Little does he expect how this case will go, or just how it will end! Curious? Read on!
This piece is a bit of an opportunity for me to try out another different style of writing. Since it's a detective story, I started it off like one of the old noirs, then kept it in the first person because I thought it'd be interesting to see it as a report from his point of view. Tell me what you thought of the style; I'm experimenting with them so that I can keep my stories fresh and interesting not only for my audience, but for myself as well.
Addy is © to

Zee is © to me.
Category Story / Fat Furs
Species Western Dragon
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 70.4 kB
I've only had enough time to read up till the part after Addylad finds the article about that dragon at the high school. But even then, I found out a lot more of Zee's past than I had expected.
You used to get bullied? You poor wolf!
I say, a story about the time when you first found out about your powers would be a great idea. (as long as you haven't done it already)
You used to get bullied? You poor wolf!
I say, a story about the time when you first found out about your powers would be a great idea. (as long as you haven't done it already)
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