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As I said in one of my new years res, I want to do more original art. So what do I do? Instead of fan art I do fantasy art XDDDD; So yea ... took a shot of equine art <geez i need to do more of this> and I feel I did ... okay ... but still need to improve. Going to make this into a full digital art, but I need to make sure everything's proportionate and well balanced before I move on ... I know the legs and the hand are both a little wonky, but please give me some feedback before I go on, thanks.
Also ... I really really REALLY want to keep her neked with a warning ... but I know people don't like seeing that ._." so if I drew her -with the possibility- of being clothed, is there a way to do that without making her looking stupid looking? (like with the hair or plants on her breasts or something ... give me some ideas)
Also ... I really really REALLY want to keep her neked with a warning ... but I know people don't like seeing that ._." so if I drew her -with the possibility- of being clothed, is there a way to do that without making her looking stupid looking? (like with the hair or plants on her breasts or something ... give me some ideas)
Category Artwork (Digital) / Fantasy
Species Horse
Size 600 x 600px
File Size 250.2 kB
Hi stranger! I saw this picture on the front page and I really love it, but if you'd like some critique, her human half seems a little out of proportion. Her arm and horsebody are fine, and her head and horsebody are fine, but her head and arm look a little off compared to each other.
If you want her to be naked without drawing her that way, maybe a silk cloth of some sort wrapped around her? Maybe conveniently holding something (or someone)? If you keep this pose, you only have to cover her breasts, so convenient censoring is more believable.
If you want her to be naked without drawing her that way, maybe a silk cloth of some sort wrapped around her? Maybe conveniently holding something (or someone)? If you keep this pose, you only have to cover her breasts, so convenient censoring is more believable.
Aww thank you, I appreciate that <333
I knew it !!! I knew the body would still look off even if I did fix it ._." Could you possibly redline it so I could see the corrections i need to do? or tips please???
hmm ... either a cloth or manipulating the hair is the best option cause I really like the pose she's in for now ... hmm ...
I knew it !!! I knew the body would still look off even if I did fix it ._." Could you possibly redline it so I could see the corrections i need to do? or tips please???
hmm ... either a cloth or manipulating the hair is the best option cause I really like the pose she's in for now ... hmm ...
I suck at redlining because I suck at regular drawing, but I can try if you'd really like. I think the best thing to do would be to make the arm a little bigger or change it altogether. Right now her head is kind of an adolescent size because it's a little big compared the rest if her, and that's okay as long as you adjust her body to match. Changing the arm should fix that.
Oh, doing that with the hair is probably best, duh. XD I had a rather complex idea for a character once who was always covered by a magic silk cloth, even in writing and such, but she never really went anywhere. I think she also had a friend who was a living plaster dinosaur skeleton, but that went even less of anywhere.
I really love how you do eyes, by the way! <3 Mine always want to be more detailed than the picture, but hers fit her purrfectly.
Oh, doing that with the hair is probably best, duh. XD I had a rather complex idea for a character once who was always covered by a magic silk cloth, even in writing and such, but she never really went anywhere. I think she also had a friend who was a living plaster dinosaur skeleton, but that went even less of anywhere.
I really love how you do eyes, by the way! <3 Mine always want to be more detailed than the picture, but hers fit her purrfectly.
well ... it's done now XDD;
here's the finished link in case you're interested:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7158564
here's the finished link in case you're interested:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7158564
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