

This story is a work in progress, I'll be adding to it, as time permits.
Category Story / Human
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 5.2 kB
No, don't shut up, I love constructive criticism! This story was always meant to be a longer piece, I just had to submit it in-progress, because the Thursday Prompt has a Wednesday deadline.
If you don't mind, keep half an eye on this story, for the complete version. I'd love your opinion on it, because one of the worst mistakes an author can make, is to forget to explain an important detail, because it's so obvious in their own mind.
If you don't mind, keep half an eye on this story, for the complete version. I'd love your opinion on it, because one of the worst mistakes an author can make, is to forget to explain an important detail, because it's so obvious in their own mind.
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