What a fun read! Not knowing the genre of the story when I started the read made the … well the “surprise part” of the story more of a surprise.

On the technical side of the writing, there were no abrupt breaks in logic or bumpy turns in the plot flow, which made the story enjoyable from beginning to end.

*tosses celebratory bouquet of flowers*

*blushes and bows* Thank you very much, Lionus, for your kind comment as well as your favoriting. I feel very deeply honored. Have you ever heard of the crux species before?

You are welcome.

No I haven't, but from the description (all that white fur) one sounds very pretty-looking.

Here's an image: http://en.wikifur.com/w/images/thum.....200px-Crux.jpg

And, if you're interested, wikifur has an entire article for them: http://en.wikifur.com/wiki/Crux_%28species%29

Hey thanks for the link-leads, Indy. I found the picture (pointed to by your first link-lead) to be very intriguing (or maybe just cute -- I haven‘t quite decided yet). If I saw any other furry artwork with a crux in it I will certainly pay attention to it.

Then, after reading the entry in Wikifur that your second link-lead pointed to I found myself wishing that all created characters/creatures were given as much of a “why” explanation by thier creators as the Crux have been given.

You're welcome, Lionus. It's actually on the species list here for when you do a search. I looked up the species to make sure I got a good idea about them before starting to write.

Hehe, having such an open origin certainly helps in creativity. Of course, their entry also indicated a possible species characteristic that I thought would lend itself well to the story.

Awesome, Fantastic, Superb, Most Enjoyable.

Aww *blushes* Thanks very much for your kind praise and fav.

Definitely, Loved the direction it went with the changes, I really need to work on the background of my Crux for his back story. X3

Thanks again! Good luck in your endeavors!