OK then... Poetigress... *clears her throat just a bit... I hemed and hawed a lot about taking your challenge, but your story was so good... well... this was a lot harder than I thought it would be... all I can say is you must type really really fast as all I managed was just over a page. Editing took me perhaps another 30 to 60 minutes.
I took the first thing to pop into my mind and ran with it.
Cheers - and enjoy.
Vixyy
I took the first thing to pop into my mind and ran with it.
Cheers - and enjoy.
Vixyy
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 98 x 120px
File Size 28.5 kB
NOOooooooo... I totally missed the camping thing. (I feel bad about that) I hemmed and hawed... went through all the ego arguments that I wasn't a student any more (did all my daughter's college lit essays for her... fun but very tedious)then set my watch for 15 minutes and dove in. I will admit it was fun and left me with a true feeling of accomplishment. It was kind of interesting to re-visit my old grade school. (yes my brain sunk in that far - and that's a good thing) The revisit was very similar to the dreams I have when I go back to my old home town and surounding area... they are the same place but not exactly the same as in real life... but they are always the same in my dreams... but that's a subject for another time yes?
Did you really do yours in 15 minutes?
V.
Did you really do yours in 15 minutes?
V.
Quite nice little story. I sort of a missed the lead somewhere when reading, it seems that the reality and the images the teacher got from the stories become mixed somewhere between. But I guess this was the intent. It creates an interesting feeling to the story, but makes it a bit harder to follow. Also, nice twist in the end. I enjoyed reading this.
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