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Alright, here's my first ever attempt at a story! :D Anyways, please be gentle. This basically shows timeline in a modern world in which my character and those of a few of my friends, and a few I came up with on the spot, are placed. The story is told in five year increments, except for one part at the end.
Akurei belongs to Lancu
Rina belongs to Rina
Rake and Siyx belongs to Rake_Vuril
All other characters made by me. :3
Also, if anyone can guess what I spent the whole time listening to while I typed this, you get a cookie.
Comments/advice welcome!
Oh yes. "It's my first time...be gentle." *meep*
Edit: made into .doc format. :P
Akurei belongs to Lancu
Rina belongs to Rina
Rake and Siyx belongs to Rake_Vuril
All other characters made by me. :3
Also, if anyone can guess what I spent the whole time listening to while I typed this, you get a cookie.
Comments/advice welcome!
Oh yes. "It's my first time...be gentle." *meep*
Edit: made into .doc format. :P
Category Story / All
Species Wolf
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 50 kB
Aside from the grammatical and syntax errors, the story is good. I actually did like it and I can see it as an animated short, personally. The level of power-housed characters doesn't allow for a tediously long and drawn out storyline, so leaving it relatively short was a good idea. Overall, it could use some organization (i.e. separating the dialogue by paragraphs of themselves so as to lower confusion, etc.), but it was good. Kudos friend!
It took me about 2 minutes to pick up a clarinet and begin playing it without any prior musical ability having been shown in my past. I didn't know anything about it, but I did it. I learned later on. I am very good at the clarinet, even exceeding some professionals in talent. I can say this because it is the truth; not for fear of being arrogant or coming off as a major douche.
I am telling you this because I want you to know and understand that talent presents itself in different ways in different people. When you have talent, you should NEVER be afraid to tell the truth to others, but most importantly, yourself. If you are good, it is as simple as admitting it when someone asks. That doesn't mean you go around telling people you are good, because you don't have anything to prove to anyone except yourself.
You have a talent for writing, my friend. I truly hope you keep at it and get even better than you already are. I want to buy one of your books in a couple of years.
In other words? Don't put yourself down so hard bro. It was actually good. Cheers!
I am telling you this because I want you to know and understand that talent presents itself in different ways in different people. When you have talent, you should NEVER be afraid to tell the truth to others, but most importantly, yourself. If you are good, it is as simple as admitting it when someone asks. That doesn't mean you go around telling people you are good, because you don't have anything to prove to anyone except yourself.
You have a talent for writing, my friend. I truly hope you keep at it and get even better than you already are. I want to buy one of your books in a couple of years.
In other words? Don't put yourself down so hard bro. It was actually good. Cheers!
...I dunno why I didn't suffer a heart attack from reading that...but...I dunno. The main reason I did that story is because when I get an epiphany...I sort of get high on the rapid amount of data flowing through my brain. I MUST apply it to something, and at the time I was listening to 'Handlebars'. Thus, I gained a plot. And I needed to do something with it...these moments happen rarely, but they last for a good long while...like, say, the 2 hours it takes to write up a story like this. <_<
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