brilliant as always. :)

I see my name in here, yes! I can almost feel my next appearence and hopefully get to finish what I started in Ch 2.

Your gonna be reffered to ALOT.....but not seen again for awhile....sadly. :(

Ok then. I just hope that when I am seen again, I hope to continue the sex I started in Ch 2.

niw this is rather good but a few little things but dont worry to much

first stephs orange markings are acutly her fur no tattos ink nothing like just just naturel fur that by the way glows very britely as theres a special vien that runs along with the blood viens that carrys a certain special chemical abeling her to glow

as steph isnt really that giggly she's more shy and curious if anything as she dosnt have any parents and acutly lives on her own or more persiouly with my cheetah who i guess for story wise is in london england sorting something out

as for where the drells live im not sure myself all i know is they live mostly in water habinated areas like the sea of the bottom of lakes as they can freely brath above land and in water

other then that i really like the story and keep it up

wait didnt see ya put lumincest my bad <_<

Yeah...i descibed them as lumecent markings in ur fur...

and i didn't describe her living situation because i didnt know...but thanks for the furture reffs