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Second of a 10 pages comic commission i did for www.furaffinity.net/user/ysergrin/
this comic is in spanish since the commissioner is from spain, and nope, he may be a lion and have Simba like name but he isn´t the Simba from the movie, he´s another lion lol >XD
i hope you may enjoy it
Transaltion:
Simba: It seems that many things changed while i wasnt around here.
Yasima: It passed a long time Simba, we missed you, you think on moving here permanently?
Simba:Yes ms.Yasima, here i will improve myself as proffesional.
Yasima: You grow up so much Simba! i still remember when Ysergrin and you were little, and some times you stayed with us on the weekends! you both been so cute!
Ysegrin: Oh dear! that´s true! what a great memorie!! those afternons we spent together were wonderful!
Simba: You always did cook for us the most tasty meals at the tea hour ms.Yasima Heh he
Yasima: Well, we´ve arrived to your new home Simba, i hope you like it
Simba: Oh! it looks great!
Yasima: Very well, now just let me find the keys, i guess i have them in my handbag.
Ysergrin: Oh! that´s true! i just happen to remeber that i had to be more early at the job today!!!!
this comic is in spanish since the commissioner is from spain, and nope, he may be a lion and have Simba like name but he isn´t the Simba from the movie, he´s another lion lol >XD
i hope you may enjoy it
Transaltion:
Simba: It seems that many things changed while i wasnt around here.
Yasima: It passed a long time Simba, we missed you, you think on moving here permanently?
Simba:Yes ms.Yasima, here i will improve myself as proffesional.
Yasima: You grow up so much Simba! i still remember when Ysergrin and you were little, and some times you stayed with us on the weekends! you both been so cute!
Ysegrin: Oh dear! that´s true! what a great memorie!! those afternons we spent together were wonderful!
Simba: You always did cook for us the most tasty meals at the tea hour ms.Yasima Heh he
Yasima: Well, we´ve arrived to your new home Simba, i hope you like it
Simba: Oh! it looks great!
Yasima: Very well, now just let me find the keys, i guess i have them in my handbag.
Ysergrin: Oh! that´s true! i just happen to remeber that i had to be more early at the job today!!!!
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Comics
Species Mammal (Other)
Size 937 x 1280px
File Size 363.2 kB
It's not really my place to do this but i figured id try my hand at a bit of a minor grammar/syntax correction to the English translation of this i suspect is literal, and Spanish doesn't translate to English very well directly...[Japanese is worse mind you, but you get the idea]
stuff inside brackets are my own words and have nothing to do with the comic
[begin]
Simba: It seems that many things have changed while i was away.
Yasima: It's been a long time Simba, we missed you, have you thought about moving here permanently?
Simba:Yes ms.Yasima, I think here i can improve my abilities as a professional
[[honestly i think i botched this line but its the best i can think of...nobody is perfect eh]
Yasima: You've grown up so much Simba! i still remember when Ysergrin and you were little, and some times you stayed with us on the weekends! you were both so cute!
Ysegrin: Oh dear! that´s true! what great memories!! those afternoons we spent together were wonderful!
[didn't change the above 2 much as they seemed mostly alright]]
Simba: You always did cook the most tasty meals at tea hour ms.Yasima Heh he.
Yasima: Well, we've arrived to your new home Simba, i hope you like it
Simba: Oh! it looks great!
Yasima: okay, now just let me find the keys, i guess i have them in my handbag.
Ysergrin: Oh! that´s right! I just remembered that i have to go to work early today!!!
[end]
that's that, if you want me to mariano ill remove this comment...also by the way your art work is great as usual.
stuff inside brackets are my own words and have nothing to do with the comic
[begin]
Simba: It seems that many things have changed while i was away.
Yasima: It's been a long time Simba, we missed you, have you thought about moving here permanently?
Simba:Yes ms.Yasima, I think here i can improve my abilities as a professional
[[honestly i think i botched this line but its the best i can think of...nobody is perfect eh]
Yasima: You've grown up so much Simba! i still remember when Ysergrin and you were little, and some times you stayed with us on the weekends! you were both so cute!
Ysegrin: Oh dear! that´s true! what great memories!! those afternoons we spent together were wonderful!
[didn't change the above 2 much as they seemed mostly alright]]
Simba: You always did cook the most tasty meals at tea hour ms.Yasima Heh he.
Yasima: Well, we've arrived to your new home Simba, i hope you like it
Simba: Oh! it looks great!
Yasima: okay, now just let me find the keys, i guess i have them in my handbag.
Ysergrin: Oh! that´s right! I just remembered that i have to go to work early today!!!
[end]
that's that, if you want me to mariano ill remove this comment...also by the way your art work is great as usual.
This comic is looking great so far, Mariano. :) I'm really liking how you've been drawing the carefully detailed backgrounds in particular, including the city landscapes and the vehicles (especially the exterior and interior views of the car that Simba, Yasima, and Ysergrin are travelling around in).
Also, thanks for including an english text translation in the pic description for this page! ^^
Also, thanks for including an english text translation in the pic description for this page! ^^
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