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I know its a little late to see any holiday artwork, but I really wanted to get this artwork done before tackling any other projects. Here it features Debbie blindly losing her head after discovering she won't be going home with her favorite game this holiday season. Her best friend Roy constantly tries to protect her secret, but as a free spirited character she can't help herself.
Also, this artwork celebrate some of my favorite characters such as Gameboysage's creations, as well as
Deviant-madness Mariko, DJwill Laura, and Duhahanjane. It always a pleasure featuring them in my artwork and all credit should go to their respected artist. They are really great.
GB-chan, Vivy, Crystal, Molley, Gracey, Flair, all belongs to
http://www.furaffinity.net/user/gameboysage
Mariko belongs to http://www.furaffinity.net/user/dnamadness/
Laura belongs to http://www.furaffinity.net/user/djwill
Jane belongs to http://dullahanjane.deviantart.com/
Also, this artwork celebrate some of my favorite characters such as Gameboysage's creations, as well as
Deviant-madness Mariko, DJwill Laura, and Duhahanjane. It always a pleasure featuring them in my artwork and all credit should go to their respected artist. They are really great.
GB-chan, Vivy, Crystal, Molley, Gracey, Flair, all belongs to
http://www.furaffinity.net/user/gameboysage
Mariko belongs to http://www.furaffinity.net/user/dnamadness/
Laura belongs to http://www.furaffinity.net/user/djwill
Jane belongs to http://dullahanjane.deviantart.com/
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1756 x 4202px
File Size 1.83 MB
It's not the writing that's the problem, it's the flow. Take the first panel for example. The flow seems to be the red one, the purple one, then Santa. But with how the flow should read normally with the placement of your word bubbles is Purple, Santa, then red one making it confusing. Flows should go top to bottom, left to right (unless you're doing a magna then it's right to left.) Try to keep that in mind when placing word bubbles and planning out your panels. Of course you can take the cop out method that several do and point arrows and/or numbers to show what order you meant it to be read.
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