Oman that was a lovely story, though some flaws. Some words in the middle of the sentence that shouldn't be capitalized, are:
-Before it was as if I was an Innocent yet <--- innocent shouldn't be capitalized
-Eloquent speeches, Noble ideas coming alive <---- noble shouldn't be capitalized here the other time you mentioned noble is fine, because that one is a noun; a rank
-considered Honor the highest of virtues <--- honor shouldn't be capitalized
-To such a keen Intelligent mind, <---intelligent shouldn't be capitalized

As well as a paragraph isn't spaced out from the one above it, just needs another hit of the enter key.

"Any time I was near the dudgeon area" spelt dungeon wrong

probably other things that I'm not catching, but those are the things I caught. I do love the story and how you wrote it.

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it :3
Thanks for taking the time to leave a review! I really appreciate it. Those errors should be fixed now ^^