Wooo this came out alot better than I was expecting, I'm happy with it so far.
I gotta thank a couple people, first off http://milesthecalicocat.deviantart.com/ for helping me solidify an idea that was vaguely kicking around my head by writing a short story based off the rather limited description I gave him.
Also I want to thank  spiralofvertigo who's proficiency in drawing feathered wings really helped me out with tips and ideas and a few quick doodles that really helped me out when I just wanted to pull my hair out.
Lastly  lupetianwolf because he's always there for me to just sit around and pretend not to be bored by me >.>.
after all that, have some free fall Rainbow Dash
MLP Hasbro Lauren Faust, y'all know the drill