So I've had a bit more spare time than usual these last couple of days, and I got some more done on the song.

I like it, especially the "stage 2", if you will, of the chorus. I just...the flow seems a little off.

I may split this into 2 different songs. We shall have to see.

A favorite is as good as telling me you liked it. If you feel like letting me know you liked it but for whatever reason don't feel like a comment is necessary, feel free to hit the fav button. I'll know what you mean. :)

Otherwise, please enjoy what I gots so far.

 JoeKing had the marvelous idea for the part at 1:26-1:40, I may not have pulled off a good chorus without his input!