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Seems Andrea is discovering a new world where all the creatures she believed to be myths all live.
This instalment is a little shorter then the others but it seemed like a good place to stop that chapter ready for the next one.
Andrea and concept © to me
This instalment is a little shorter then the others but it seemed like a good place to stop that chapter ready for the next one.
Andrea and concept © to me
Category Story / General Furry Art
Species Western Dragon
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 29.5 kB
Nice.
One thing I might suggest is that Andrea's characterization could be a bit stronger. She seems a tad passive to the events going on, which of course could easily be chalked up to her circumstances legitimately being overwhelming for her. Perhaps draw attention to that fact some.
Hoping for more!
One thing I might suggest is that Andrea's characterization could be a bit stronger. She seems a tad passive to the events going on, which of course could easily be chalked up to her circumstances legitimately being overwhelming for her. Perhaps draw attention to that fact some.
Hoping for more!
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