So first off, I know the guitar is a little overbearing/hard to hear at times. It's being very difficult with me and every time I think I've found a middle ground there is a part in the song that the guitar disappoints me, in one way or another.

And the Breakdown at 3:00-3:25 is more of an Interlude. I'll be working on that as I come up with more tracks.

2:53 is just an error. I'll fix it in the next WIP.

 JoeKing had the marvelous idea for the part at 1:26-1:40, and parts like it throughout the song; I may not have pulled off a good chorus without his input!

All said and done, hope you enjoy what I have so far. :)