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This is my first attempt at this exercise, something I may try to do from time to time to improve, or merely for the sake of fun.
It is relatively short, critique would be appreciated.
The theme is Shadows.
It is relatively short, critique would be appreciated.
The theme is Shadows.
Category Story / General Furry Art
Species Housecat
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 25 kB
It's a writing exercise, started by 
poetigress and picked up by 
duroc, every week there is a theme, and you write something for it. Length and such is up to you, participation is on an as wished basis, it's merely an exercise to try new things if you like. Duroc posted his first topic yesterday.
poetigress and picked up by 
duroc, every week there is a theme, and you write something for it. Length and such is up to you, participation is on an as wished basis, it's merely an exercise to try new things if you like. Duroc posted his first topic yesterday. 
The story had a pretty good flow. You were able to get across the characters emotions very well. While I was not personally able to get the chills that is because I could see the imagery so well and those things do not frighten me but I can definitely see where child hood fears were expressed very well.
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