Sounds like it came straight out of a video game :P

I like the writing in this a lot. I tend to think the EWQL library has a bit too much reverb by default for this style of music, but on the plus side your big sections sound pretty awesome with it.

:( Eh... that is true. I want to make less reverb but I can't :( Tnx for comment

I know your pain. :D One of the few issues I have with the library.

A friend of mine kinda ruined this one for me, it is a good song. But the first time I played it he told me "Stop watching porn!" So the first thing that popped up in my mind after that comment was a detective pornography film. How short this one is makes me think that it was a side project or the beginning of something you were trying out.
I don't quite know how this one is compared to your others, it wouldn't really fit with anything else you've made so far. But variety.

O.o Okay my computer was messing with me apparently, it only played 12 seconds of it. So forget what I said about the song being a side project.

Erm... I don't know what to say... thanks?

Sorry, weird comment I know, but like I said, my friend ruined it for me. It generally makes me think of a detective though.