EEEEEEE! I insta-luv him! And that's a pretty good poem too. The meter could be a widdle tighter but it has some seriously good things going on...I love the little refrain part.

Yikes, it took me 17 hours to see this? I FAIL IT :<

Yeah its meant to be sung more than anything, with some syllables blended to smooth things out. Think a sorta Yellowcard + Zebrahead mix when it comes to the tune, with a nice Guitar line though the whole thing.

Oooooooh. I was thinking of it as plain poetry recital...the different timing definitely clicks with music though.

FEN IS LUV. Clearly I'm going to have to draw him schnuggling with Spring as thanks!! Any requests? ^_~

Well just some things
1) he doesn't smoke
2) he wears bangles on his ankles and wrists (couldn't get them to scan right without mussing up the text)
3) He like to give piggy back rides. (no real reason for it, but he's kinda sudden about it. So its like he's kidnapping you in an adorably nice way.)

PIGGEH BACK RIDES!!

I was just wanting to draw one of those today! O_O Great minds think alike, clearly! I have a giftart for an IRL friend I gotta do but maybe tomorrow I may have time at work for some PIGGEH BACK RIDIN' ACTION. <--putting 'action' on the end of it makes it sound naughtier than it is...>_>;;

well Fen also has a long, thick, pony tail (not shown) so if a gal was getting a piggy back ride..... *winkwinknudgenudge*

for long ponytails on certain guys~ (fox guys definitely included!)

just to be clear, he rests smaller persons on his shoulders. (hence why the ponytail is so suggestive)

Heh heh, significance not lost, no worries. :3

just for those who aren't of a 'rapier wit'

Lawl...XD

Ponytails get to have all the fun.

Damn straight!