Really well done!

This is really awesome!
I guess the only thing I can think of is the bottom of the page is lacking in something - maybe a small graphic design or somthing to wrap it up
I got nothing else sorry :o

Make the text darker and maybe a texture in the background (a suble one) just to make it look less gradient filled. The flow of the images is kinda broken up at the bottom as it's the only place they don't connect. I'm not sure if you did that on purpose since the last one is death though, but something to take note of if you hadn't. Also maybe chuck a white stroke on the title words so they don't blend into the leaves so much. Also I'd personally probably chuck the scientific name in, but I doubt it's actually necessary >__>

Otherwise it's looking pretty good :D I love the colour scheme and all your graphics. Are they all vector based or did you just do them nice and cleanly like that?

Thanks for the help, unfortunately I had to print it before I got to read your comments :( I had to splice and tape fourteen pieces of paper together to make it actual size, so I won't be able to make any changes.

Yep it's all vector :3

No worries, I know how that goes, I did graphic design too >__>

That looks really nice :O So professional~

I love the layout and composition. I feel like it flows well. The style of illustration is appropriate for the information you're presenting, too. :)

I personally have a problem with the visual hierarchy of your information blurbs. The Egg:/Pupa:/Etc subheads are the same color and typeface (as far as I can tell) and it just sort of makes my eyes miss that indicator even though it's bigger. I still feel like it could stick out more. Try putting the subheads in a different color or typeface. I think readability would increase tenfold. :) Perhaps you could use the sans-serif typeface from the header at the top.

Also, I have a problem with the heart graphic. It's cute and clever, yes, but doesn't fit with your other illustrations. All of the other ones have a wealth of details while the heart just feels bland. I just feel like it sticks out, but not in a good way. Is there a way you could keep the heart shape, but maybe make it out of the two heads of the moths and their antennae make a heart shape, or maybe you could play with the moths' wings to make them form a heart together? I dunno, just some ideas. Overall, I think this is an awesome piece! I love your header. Maybe depending on the print size, bump up the size of the "Lifestyle of the.." Just for readability's sake. Just seems a bit small even though I realize you're sizing it down insanely to fit onto FA.

I love seeing design work on here. <3

Thanks for all the feedback, I'll keep it in mind!

In the first bubble I think names should be name, and at the end theres a typo where win should be wing. Otherwise, that's all I caught. Visually I think it looks pretty cool :)

You're very right. Lets hope my teacher doesn't see it :P

Maybe you can make the words like 'larva' and 'pupa' darker. Other than that it looks great. :3

The stages if life text is a bit too light. But I'm no professional and otherwise I think it looks stunning :>

Beautiful work. You use the word lifecycle, could this design be made circular? I'm not sure if that would work any better though as it flows nicely already.
I agree with Baskerville in that the heart graphic seems a little out of place.

However, the colour scheme is pleasing, it's informative, and the eye is led down through the information and images very nicely. It's great!

Hope you got a good grade on it. It looked great

God I love silkmoths. I tried breeding Lunas and Cecropias a couple times- and damn do those bastards eat a lot! I did this thingy for an art class a while back- look on the right, see anything familiar?
http://www.furaffinity.net/full/1743257/

Just wanted to pop in and say that I looove this set up! <3