I love how you make her/him's body so sleek :

Thank you.
And that's a "her". C:

Why not a ' Him '? D: You have too little M/M art.....

..Too little? M/M is what I most have in my gallery. XD

charizard!!! But no char?....
Like the body, as well as the detailing and the strange eerie feeling coming from it.

No "char"?
What do you mean? D:

char is short for charmander

Ah. Gotcha.

Well... That's strange. I did want to add a Charmander there. But uh... I didn't know how to, I guess.



...As for random info, she does have a child. But I guess he sleeps on another room or something? Yeah, I don't know. XD

lol, nice^^

Bring in the darkness much more. You only really bring down the light as you reach the tip of his wing. Maybe start speeding up the decline of light, closer to around the midsection.

As well, why is the only sort of shadow she has on her body? D: You need to be sure to make her shadow reflecting on the bedding itself.

All in all, decent, well done. :) This is what practice is for!

That is true. I stopped "darkening" the piece soon at the tip of her wings because, since I use black lineart, I feared it would just blend in with the dark parts and well... Just get lost.
I also wanted to give a focus on her face. Since... I thought she was kinda pretty. COUGH. >_>

I am not sure what you mean by "Maybe start speeding up the decline of light, closer to around the midsection." :C


As for the shadow/light on the bed. That was a stupid mistake I did by shading on the wrong layer. After that I wasn't able to do it as I wanted. I was hoping it would go unnoticed when I added the light of her flame. But it seems you did catch that. XD

Thanks again for the critique! : D