Your getting better at using effects and creating decent melodies and bass lines, though is this track your percussion was very soft compared to the harshness of the chosen synths and at some points was nearly inaudible to the synths playing. You should study build ups and drops for the progression of a few of your melodies, some of them felt very forced. Keep up the work you are getting better with each track you make.

thnx; yea i see what u mean about the percussion.