well this is some thing i wrote to get people asking about the books / comics id like to write but i cant draw or spell so i need BIG help
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i sit here in this now empty city wondering not of what happened to make the people go away nor am i thinking why dose it look a bomb went off. i sit here wondering who am i. i never really gave it much thought. i have had insomnia for over 6 months now and the one time i do get some rest being knocked unconscious none the less but still it was sleep i remember dreaming of 1 shadowy figures standing in front of me.... guarding me from 3 other figures and after that bright light, fire, and blood then it gets really hazy.... thinking back to this i cry and i do not know why i cry but cry i feel like part of me died then i don't what the dream was really about but i do know that i remember it in to much detail for it to just be a dream ...... the city around me is so quiet i cant hear any people or animals the only thing i can hear is a distant passenger jet flying by. i get up and think to myself my day is bound to get more twisted i just know it. THE END?
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this book would be a prequels to another book that i want to do well anyways in this one the main char (lets call her Kristy for now nothing is final it could change) its starts off with some flash backs of some lab where she sees allot of things but not going to give much away atm but she sees allot of weired things and to make it all weirder she wakes up in a make shift coffin littrealy 6 ft under ...... all and all the story has many twists and turns with alot of things that our world considers taboo such as religion body modification's killing genetics and all the good things that make a good book i hope..... and by the end your mouth shale be agape >=D
OH AND ONE THING if you didnt already guess this is not the story its just was made to get people to ask and wonder as i think i already said and also feel free to ask questions ^^
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i sit here in this now empty city wondering not of what happened to make the people go away nor am i thinking why dose it look a bomb went off. i sit here wondering who am i. i never really gave it much thought. i have had insomnia for over 6 months now and the one time i do get some rest being knocked unconscious none the less but still it was sleep i remember dreaming of 1 shadowy figures standing in front of me.... guarding me from 3 other figures and after that bright light, fire, and blood then it gets really hazy.... thinking back to this i cry and i do not know why i cry but cry i feel like part of me died then i don't what the dream was really about but i do know that i remember it in to much detail for it to just be a dream ...... the city around me is so quiet i cant hear any people or animals the only thing i can hear is a distant passenger jet flying by. i get up and think to myself my day is bound to get more twisted i just know it. THE END?
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this book would be a prequels to another book that i want to do well anyways in this one the main char (lets call her Kristy for now nothing is final it could change) its starts off with some flash backs of some lab where she sees allot of things but not going to give much away atm but she sees allot of weired things and to make it all weirder she wakes up in a make shift coffin littrealy 6 ft under ...... all and all the story has many twists and turns with alot of things that our world considers taboo such as religion body modification's killing genetics and all the good things that make a good book i hope..... and by the end your mouth shale be agape >=D
OH AND ONE THING if you didnt already guess this is not the story its just was made to get people to ask and wonder as i think i already said and also feel free to ask questions ^^
Category Story / Abstract
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Size 120 x 120px
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Concept sounds interesting enough. One thing I've found that makes prose more readable is breaking things up into smaller chunks, to wit:
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I sit in the now-empty city.
I don't wonder what happened to make the people go away.
I don't wonder why the place looks like a bomb went off.
I do wonder...
Who am I?
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See what I mean?
HTH!
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I sit in the now-empty city.
I don't wonder what happened to make the people go away.
I don't wonder why the place looks like a bomb went off.
I do wonder...
Who am I?
****
See what I mean?
HTH!
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