Straight to scraps with this because it's:

a) arse
b) kicking my arse

If I can rescue it, will become the illustration for chapter 20. It's not a million miles away, it's just very flawed right now. Er, and characters will obviously not be naked - tis just easier to construct them sensibly when I start with the basic body and add clothes after.

...you'd be amazed how many things you see when the image is really tiny that you're completely blind to when full screen with it :S