
A short vore story. I'm always seeking to improve my writing so if there is anything you can see that could be improved or any suggestions you could make I'd be very happy to hear them.
Category Story / Vore
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 4.3 kB
Listed in Folders
I wasn't planning on doing so, as I always considered it the least well written of my stories, but as it seems so popular I guess I will.
Also, sorry for taking so long to respond. I first had to find Duty on my harddrive, then fix several typos, spelling mistakes, and badly phrased sentences.
Also, sorry for taking so long to respond. I first had to find Duty on my harddrive, then fix several typos, spelling mistakes, and badly phrased sentences.
Should have mentioned this in my other comment, but here is the link http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17267887/
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