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This is the second chapter. Hope you enjoy it and comment if you wish. Thank you for your time!
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You seem to have earned my attention.
Just a couple things:
First you don't need to announce line breaks, simply use ~*~ on the center, most will understand it.
Second break your paragraphs a bit more, if too much is jumbled together it will be harder to read. Best places to break into new paragraphs is when the scene, of topic changes.
Just a couple things:
First you don't need to announce line breaks, simply use ~*~ on the center, most will understand it.
Second break your paragraphs a bit more, if too much is jumbled together it will be harder to read. Best places to break into new paragraphs is when the scene, of topic changes.
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