sory for the confusion. XD i love it either way :D


and critique as in what? anything in general? background or the style or coloration? it depends on what your going for first for some to critique. as my class [teacher from art class] says," what was or is your motive, your inspiration, and overall theme for the piece." example, was it still life, realism, toon, doodle, and so on.

It's ok ^^;

Critique in the animation itself. But I just wanted to know if I got everything right. Or close to right?

prety close XD

and its goodXD i cant nor do i know how to do animation at all so its prety awsum seing how others can do it XD your animation is prety clean.

That's good to hear then lol

It's fine ^^